Traveller's Diary (4º ESO)

3/20/2013

What do you want to remember about your trip twenty years from now? What did you see? Who did you spend time with? What funny things were said? Write an entry for a traveller's diary below.

(Write at least 150 words. Check spelling and grammar before sending your comment.)

Natalia Torres

3/20/2013 10:51:47 pm

It was really fun to go to the beach in group and to have freedom to be on vacation in the middle of the month of March. I enjoyed a lot spending time visiting new places and the city of Granada.
I have the best time!

Gina

3/21/2013 12:12:36 am

Hey Natalia!

I wish you had written more! I would have loved to hear about Granada, because I've never been. Anyways, I'm glad you had fun.

P.S. Careful with your past tense and can't wait to see you after the break.

Diego Barajas

3/20/2013 10:52:47 pm

the thing that i want to rember of my trip to granada(spain) is when luis,victor,javier dominguez and me were to the macauto imitate being in a car. we were doing that wee were in an imaginary car but when we went into de mac auto there was a lot of cars and we decide to go into normal.When we were in we saw in a tv some cameras en victor said:"im going to go out and you say to me if you see me" he went out an started walking as if he drive a car. it was like LOL and the waiter was looking as with a strange face as they are crazy and then we took the food and waited victor pablo and javi where searching the cameras and it was so funny luis and me were inside de macdonals laughing a lot and the people inside de macdonals were looking us very strange.then luis and me were out and pablo,javi and victor were inside watching the tv.It was awesome!!!

Gina

3/21/2013 12:17:18 am

Hey Diego!

It sounds like you guys had a lot of fun, and got really lucky that McDonalds didn't kick you out. I hope you remember this time for the rest of your life. Also, I hope you remember how to use punctuation over break.

See you soon!
Gina

clara ferrer

3/20/2013 10:53:45 pm

The thing i want to remember is when we were all the class in the beach playin and having fun.

We see granada the Alhambra caves of Nerja and the museum of science.

With all my friends and my teachers

Alfredo's jokes and some funny commentaries...
It was very fun and all the nights we watch films all of us and we were in the beds doing sely things.
it was very good and the two teacher that come with us were very simphatic.
And the HARLEM SHAKE were the most laught thing of the trip.
I wish that it would repeat.

Gina

3/27/2013 09:54:38 pm

Hi Clara!

I love Harlem Shake videos! Who got to dance at the beginning of the song? It's good to see that you had so much fun. Alfredo is a funny guy. Careful with the use of "all of", which should be things like "every night" and "everyone".

See you when we get back from vacation!
Gina

javier

3/20/2013 10:54:33 pm

I really liked to hang out with my friends travel to a city as beautiful as Granada, I really liked in March be able bathe and wash in the pool of the hotel, and to see Sierra Nevada to the right and to the left, to see the sea. I had a good time in general, and I laughed a lot with my friends

Gina

3/27/2013 09:57:29 pm

Hello Javier!

Nice use of the verb "hang out"! Did you really bathe in the pool?? Is that allowed?? I've heard that the views in Granada are spectacular, and it's great that you got to experience them first hand.

See you soon,
Gina

Javier

4/18/2013 06:47:15 pm

hello! I read your message and if allowed to swim in the pool, although in reality it was to allow the swim was the time, because there were other days it rained and it was very hot.

greetings!

Alejandra

3/20/2013 10:55:10 pm

I had a really good time in our trip to Granda. The place was very nice, the hotel was okay, and the people was cool. I think I will remember almost all the trip twenty years from now, because all the time it was like the best moments. I laugh a lot and enjoy all the time. In the other hand, we also went to a lot of pretty places and new beautiful things. It was a great trip!

Gina

3/27/2013 10:23:01 pm

Hey Alejandra!

I'm glad you had such a great time. Of all the places you saw, which place was the most beautiful? Did you get to go in El Alhambra? Careful with your prepositions ("on our trip" and "on the other hand"), and see you soon!

Have fun this vacation!
Gina

Mikel Garcia

3/20/2013 10:55:31 pm

I like a lot the hability of travel with my friends and can know more of them because living with persons reveal a lot os positive and negative qualities of the persons who you live.I think that we can stay in the beach having a really good time but the more important thing is that i went with the friends and person that i take care.

Gina

3/27/2013 11:03:51 pm

Hello Mikel!

I hope you didn't find too many faults in your friends and that overall your trip was a good experience. Careful with the difference between "take care" (cuidar a) and "care about" (preocuparse).

Have fun this week!
Gina

Pablo Aneas

3/20/2013 10:55:57 pm

I want to remember all the trip, but always I will remember the day when we went to the McDonalds, and do amazing silly things, like getting into the McAuto without car, and finding a toad in the beach and other things. We spend some of an afternoon on making our Harlem Shake, that can be watched at YouTube. We wen't on St. Patrick's day to an Irish pub, and we received a Guiness' hat and some other "Green" stuff. We also went to the beach almost all the days and we visited the Alhambra, the Nerjas' caves and the Parque de las Ciencias, which are all loctaed in Granada.

Gina

3/27/2013 11:20:41 pm

Hello Pablo!

It sounds like you had a really good time! I love Harlem Shake videos and your use of relative clauses. I didn't know that toads could live in salty places, and I'm glad you got to experience a bit of St. Patrick's Day. I hope you took a lot of photos and have fun this week!

See you soon,
Gina

Alba Díaz

3/20/2013 10:57:38 pm

Well, I think that the most important think I will remember as the time pass is the feeling of being with my friends in a fantastic and beautiful place, having fun and doing silly things.
In this five days we have gone to Almuñecar, a beautiful place which has a perfect beach.
First day, we arrived to the hotel and went to have a bath in the beach.
Second day we visited Nerja an incredible place with a fantastic cave and then we went to the beach and had lunch in an italian restaurant. After that we swam in the hotel pool.
Third day we went to a natural museum and we had lunch in a moll.
The greatest day was the forth, in which we went to visit Granada: the Alhambra, the Albahicín...
In general I spent time with all of my friends and I never will forget this perfects days.
Also the two teachers: Alfredo and Maribel, had fun and did a lot of jokes. One of them was at night, when me and my friends were in a room watching a movie, they called us as they were the recepcionist of the hotel and we all got scared.
WONDERFUL DAYS WUTH WONDERFUL PEOPLE

Gina

3/27/2013 11:29:31 pm

Hey Alba!

I'm glad you had such a good time. Do you know if the Nerja cave is the one they talk about in Don Quijote? Alfredo and Maribel are a lot of fun and I'm glad you guys got to goof around with them. I had no idea that Granada is so close to the beach and I'm feeling a bit jealous about the time you guys got to spend in the sun.

Have a good vaca and see you soon!
Gina

Silvia Garcia

3/20/2013 10:58:13 pm

The things I will want to remember in the future is our first experience of being with the friends one week on the beach, spending time all together swimming and singing.
We spend a great time together making jokes.
The first day we arrived to Almuñecar, we went to the hotel to left our things and then we went to the beach. The second day we went to Nerja caves and then we eat pizza all together. The third day we went to visit Granada, the fourth day we went to La Alhambra, and the last day we came to Madrid again. for me there was a great week.

Gina

3/27/2013 11:36:40 pm

Hi Silvia!

It sounds like you guys got to do a lot of things in such a short time. I'm glad you all finally got the beach vacation you wanted and that you were able to mix it with a bit of history. What did you think about Al Alhambra? Did you get to go inside? Would you recommend the city to other people?

I hope you have fun this week,
Gina

Javier Domínguez

3/20/2013 10:58:56 pm

I want to remember all the good time we have had there, because the good vibes were there in all moment. Specially I want to remember the last day, because Pablo, Diego, Victor, Luis and me wet to the McDonald's and enter in the McAuto like we were in a car and we ordered there. I think that the person who i sped more time with was Alba, because we were all day talking about nothing, but also I spent so much time with Agus, Ale and Natalia.
First day we stay at the beach that was near to the hotel, the second day we went to nerja, and we see the caves of Nerja and the village of Nerja. We spent the day there. The third day we went to the science an technology museum in Granada. It was so nteresting, there was a whale heart exposed to the people's gazes
The fourth day we go to the Alhambra, also placed in Granada, an we expended entire day there and we go to El Albaicin to buy some things.

Gina

3/27/2013 11:45:56 pm

Hey Javier!

After reading all of these, I'm a bit confused. Did you guys stay in Almunecar or in Granada? It sounds like you spent a lot of time at the beach, which makes me jealous. I'm glad that you got to spend time with your friends and that you got to learn at the same time. The whale heart sounds cool. How big was it?

Have fun on vacation this week and see you next Wednesday!
Gina

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